All Comments on 'Assuming the Position'

Cute story. What else could happen on a cross country trip? Thank you for your contributions.

Being stopped, arrested and molested by a cop who could have been a beauty queen - fantasy, but so is almost everything here. It is too bad the author had to pile in another female character together with lesbian behavior - the result was confused

the reverse of titillating

As a matter of style, the paragraphs are each several times too long.