All Comments on 'Astarte Ch. 01'

Jerry in Washington state, USA - I enjoyed this first chapter and look forward to more. I liked the section of how Astarte and Gideon "met". I also enjoyed the "limits" of Gideon's power. It will be interesting to me to see what direction you take this story. Nicely written sex scenes, too.

Very good with a heavy hint of more to come in various ways both appropriate and not. Your protagonist and the other characters can make for many more chapters to come. Somehow I doubt he will limit himself to the females introduced in the first chapter, or at least I hope so. Very good job with a somewhat familiar premise. More please, much more.

great story with promise for much more what a way to start. whats more important as a writer is the continuity that runs through the story keep up the great work!

and have us meeting his sister soon; will this story go in the family direction? If so a warning to those who don't like that kind of thing would be appropriate.

if this chapter were 20 pages longer it still would not be enough...more!...more!!!

A lot of different characters were introduced into the story and Deon either had sex with them or had a promise to have sex with them. Just the kind of story that keeps my interest and wanting more of the same.

So now that Deon knows a little about his abilities, will he try to find the limits of his power?

Very interesting and a fast moving story, along with being well written and nicely edited.

Thanks for the read.

As a lover of all things Egyptian I was drawn to this story. I was not disappointed.

A brilliant storyline, oft repeated but still very much your own. I will enjoy this one.

I really enjoyed this story, the fact that the main character, in the end of the story, really proved to be a "nice" guy. He may have used his new power, in forcing his prof, for his own enjoyment, but also made sure that his partner enjoyed herself. I'm a sucker for "nice" guy/gal angles. Please don't let his new power change him, if there are more chapters. Thanks again for this story & please more chapters. RG

Way to go DEON...LOL you too Fred.

What's the point with powers/the gift if he's sharing all the girls with others? Gross!!

Maybe she gave him the gifts because he is a decent type.

Thank you. Well written and thought out. Classy, sexy and thoroughly enjoyable. I liked theat the sex scenes are fun and respectful. Too many here treat the women characters like dirt. Very fun read!

Love the story. AAAAAA++++++