- NonHuman
- At First Sight Ch. 02
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All Comments on 'At First Sight Ch. 02'
by mellifluent89
- 17 Comments
Patrolin_Ausalmost 12 years agoNever thought I'd be rooting for the demon over an angel but I am! Great story.
MizTalmost 12 years agorather than Angel VS Demon. I think the demon is the good guy and the angel is the bad guy. I can't wait to read more of this story so please keep it coming...
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI also am hoping she chooses Goliath. I really couldn't stand Ethan. This the only time that I hope the demon wins lol.
Redmoon_Elzalmost 12 years agoI think Ethan needs to have chance to redeem himself , he seems like a good guy just too sure of himself , I like Goliath as well I just want them to have an equal chance at happiness
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoEthan just jumps to conclusions and acts like a little diva Goliath actually acts like he cares...*sigh*...We need more goliaths in the world
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI am hooked! I beg you, don't leave me hanging. Please continue with your story until you have reached the conclusion. I am looking forward to reading the next installment.
jerin51almost 12 years agoI wish and hope that this sweet love story will have them both as her mate, somehow they will overcome obstacles from both sides and hopefully live together and protect each other. Is this just wishful thinking or?
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoOmg. I love this story. It is so perfect. I love that there is actually a
story! Please continue writing. Also, Goliath>Ethan
Queen_Vickialmost 12 years agoDon't give up on the angel just yet. I like Ethan and Goliath both. There's nothing wrong with having both of them in her bed ;)
mellifluent89almost 12 years agoAuthorI'm working on chapter three now. Thanks for your feedback, guys! :)
<3 mel
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoTenderly erotic, yet powerfully arousing!
Tell us what sexual wonders dawn brought.
Stacey Lynne
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI love this story but am I the only one who wants Ethan? Come on, he may not be perfect but he sure as hell comes pretty damn close.
Nasuada8almost 12 years agoThis is a great story but I'm confused... Why is he crying? And what happened next? It sounds like the demon is planning on her leaving him...? Choosing the angel instead... I'm so confused?!
Anonymousover 11 years agoPlease please keep writing, I love goliath's character he the man we've always wanted. Can wait to read the rest of this story and it's outcome.
