- NonConsent/Reluctance
- At Home
- Comments
All Comments on 'At Home'
by J.M.
- 30 Comments
Anonymousover 18 years agoI assume (or at least hope) there will be a part 2 and perhaps a part 3, because the tale's not fully told. Ronnie W.
Anonymousover 18 years agoI noted your comment on "At School", and brave Anonymous' comment re: Cheater. Why not give J.M the credit for his own story? True, it would have been more up front had he noted the same for "At Home", but maybe it was an oversight. At any rate, an enjoyable story if moms are your thing.
Tibxoover 18 years agoI absolutely loved it. However, I do agree with the others that the story is not complete. Would be interesting in seeing the mother's reaction in the cold light of day and what events are triggered.
Keep up the good work.
J.M.over 18 years agoAuthorSorry for the confusion, I resubmitted this because I did not like having my stories in lots of tiny parts. As for the new story I mentioned was coming.. that's on hold due to lack of time and motivation.
Anonymousover 18 years ago"WOW" what a fantastic story. i do hope you are going to follow up with more of this one great bit of writing i could have been there watching this mom and son fucking one other. well done on your storie love it from begining to end. one last work fantastic.
Anonymousabout 18 years agowe need a pt 2, what happens the next day? she obviously will distance herself so how will he try to seduce her again?
Anonymousover 15 years agoA very nice story that had me the entire time. I love the closeness of the two and understand his desperation for her.If only it were more a norm, many things in our world would be better and the confusion of growing up would be a lesson to life rather than a damnation to Puritan thought.
dinernighthawkover 14 years agoSeriously, this is one of the most well paced stories I've ever read. And I read A LOT. Anyone who thought it was anti-climactic is obviously not the readership you're catering to. Good work!
Anonymousabout 14 years agoWow-what a story... The son got the ultimate fantasy from his mother! She let him screw her. Not only that he was able to screw mom and shoot his load of sperm deep into her womb! That is the greatest gift a mother can give to her son. He filled his own flesh and blood mom with his seed. Fantastic!!!!!
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoawesome.... totally HOT.... i just loved it.......
please come up with a sequel... :)
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI loved the comment by the reader who wrote, "Screwing mom." He said, "That is the greatest gift a mother can give to her son. He filled his own flesh and blood mom with his seed." Truer words were never spoken, pal. Moms who open their cunt to their own son, who let their boy unload his young balls up the same cunt he came out of, are the best. They know that up their mommy-hole is where their boy's creamy sperm belongs.
LAROCabout 11 years agoHOT HOT HOT ......THANKS FOR THE READ.. .............LAROC
rightbankalmost 11 years agoshe sleeps that soundly? and, if she did it would be non consensual.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI think, therefore I am entitled to respond to your note. Rape is not a turn on per se, for me as I have found my biggest turn on is to call idiots like you the very dregs of society.
I am willing to bet you read the entire story in order to fully justify your vaunted opinion.
Get a life !
Anonymousover 9 years agoFirst off you frigid ass hole, this category is on rape stories. I'd rather a rapist read and fantasize and your telling them reading about a surpressed fantasy is wrong, your like a parasite to goodness!!! I for one surely don't agree on raping any one but this is just words on a page being posted. Its fiction you don't like it then stay t'f out the non consent reluctance category and stick to your likings and leave those who enjoy writing and reading what they want
Love your story just seriously get ticked off when people do and say such maddening things BTW My Name is Lesly I'm a fan of this story of yours bravo Mr./Mrs. Writer
Anonymousabout 5 years agoWell written and hot, hot, hot. Nice to have a good short tale for a change. Excellent job of leaving ending open for each reader to write his own. The model hook was a great idea as was her sweetness and innocence
csltover 3 years agoShe is Quite the prize.
Glad we get to see the sometimes goofy attempts as he uses his testosterone flooded brain to seduce the woman of his dreams.
Anonymousover 3 years agoThank you for this story.
😊
Anonymousalmost 2 years agogreat how he fucked his mother and they became lovers and she could not get enough of his cum and they start to fuck nightly, then she give him a nice gift and let him fuck her gorgeous ass and come deep into her bowels, which they both enjoyed
