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This is showing up as new, but I KNOW I have seen it on this site before today. What gives?

no offence but a woman wrote this? Yeah I think not.. come on now dear be a tinsy bit more realstic... I cringed!.. Sweeetheart whatever sex you may be... definance and submission are a close sword but dont confuse the two... its not logical.. "I hate you ... oh your raping me... now im scared you wont like the way I suck dick"... ermmm not real... potentially great writing.. just learn realism

The unfortunate thing is is that this story is realistic.... If you're a motherfucking actual rapist. I've probably read at least 400 stories on this category over the years and it's only a few that make me wonder if they were written by some misogynistic asshole who shouldn't be allowed within 100 feet of females.

Fucking hot!!