All Comments on 'At the Villa Ch. 08 Pt. 04'

Some errors have entered into the story for which only proof reading will find and then correct. One glaring that distracts is the use of "come" when refering to orgasm/semen/sexuaal release/etc. such as "pre-come" when it should be "pre-cum" is but one case.

I had almost given up on Sam, it's great to have him back. I have read all of the storys that Sam is in and look forward to reading more. You have created in Sam a man I think all women want, I know I would love to have Sam even if I had to share him. If by chance he is real, (which I doubt) where is he? Looking forward to the next chapter !!!!!