All Comments on 'At The Window'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
window

GREAT STORY, love that she is apparently OK with the fact of being an exhibitionist.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
I would also like to say, "GREAT STORY!!"

and ask for you to please continue this storyline.

"Gimme an M - O - R - E, and you -know- what you've got!"

Thanks for writing, especially for all of us girls who like to "peep" AND be "peeped on". Yummy!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
good story

I really liked your story. you should continue on with these same two people and maybe even add her girlfriend or two in his spying.

Satisfier2007Satisfier2007over 15 years ago
Fine Voyeurism

This is a fine story of voyeurism. The descriptions of her stimulating herself are vivid. So were the descriptions of his response outside her window.

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It isn't clear if she is an exhibitionist or not; and that's okay. After all, her location is not easily accessible, so the odds of someone watching are small.

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One minor complaint: the context of her comment that intrigued him was not clear and, therefore, diminished realism.

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