by bassbelly
Cracker of a story ,in my opinion this is one where a sequel would really work.
Great tale, but way too short! You need to develop this one into the wonderful love story that it has the potential of becoming. Please write the sequel.
Agree with others,a super story could be developed into a real love story,in fact I think it already is ,a sequel would be really great.
Sweetie Pie could very well be having a little pie if they are not careful,a smashing story.
someone said young aunts are tempting. What about the older ones? More experienced, more tempting. believe me!
Her relationship to that child they are own their way to producing.....Great tale!