All Comments on 'Auntie Sally Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
odd choices

this was a pretty okay story, but you made some really odd word choices. she gave an "accurate" blowjob? shoved it down her "pharynx"? how about throat? there's nothing wrong with cracking the old thesaurus open but... and "enquire". i know it's in the dictionary, but it's "inquire". the enquirer is a magazine. you use the word "enquire" and there's an immediate distracting connotation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
nice

waiting for part 2 ; make sure to give her a facial !!

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERover 14 years ago
OK

something was off a bit maybe to quick of a start other than that good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Amazingly Horney

beastboy42beastboy42almost 9 years ago

As a deep lover of "Older women / younger men" stories, I DEEPLY love this...

Stories of men being put in their proper place are very erotic, and oddly very rare... So many stories have men in dominant rolls.. which is frankly just... Boring...

Having a male being used, not just by an older women, but by his aunt adds an extra layer of thrill and naughtiness to it. Judging by your name it seems this is what your after ;) I have to say what REALLY makes this story stand out from so many others is how 'Juicy' it is ;)

The licking, drinking and squirting, is something deeply erotic. A lot of stories rarely have the female orgasm at all, let alone almost drown the male in a flood of 'Femcum'

Know this was done some time ago, but hope ou may continue at some point!!!

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