All Comments on 'Aural Pleasure'

Hot! You definitely have potential as a writer. Literotica has a volunteer editor program - your writing could be much more absorbing if you got some help with grammar and proofreading.

great content. need urgency.

This is absorbing and descriptive. Maybe a slight stylistic adjustment to make it more of a narrative and less an accounting?

Congratulations on O, she sounds like a wonderful girlfriend!

The story was amazing made me cum all over the bed you and O are lucky to have eachother

This was so sexy! I loved you And O. It had my cum everywhere. Loved it