All Comments on 'Ava Plays Pool'

There will be more of you and your whore wife? I bet she doesn't know who the father is. A slut/whore and her pimps story. YUCK.

this story is what happens when a pig marries a snake

There's nothing better than having two cocks inside you at the same time. My husband do it a lot with our guy friends taking turns. Or is that a gang bang. Whatever, I luv it! Great story!

Don't listen to the critics. Unless you've had the thrill of seeing your naked wife riding another man's cock while her tits are bouncing, you just can't explain it to anyone. It'll make you cum in your pants. Give Ava a kiss for me and an "A" for fucking!

I havent read this story - not my type - so I wont comment on it. I could not, however, avoid seeing the crass comments. It always amazes me that these morons can string two words together. Its pretty obvious that they don't have the skill to write stories themselves nor the brass to actually put their names to their graffiti!

Why do people like that read these stories at all? Why are they even looking on this site?

Feedback is a great tool on Literotica and something that we authors value. It is a shame that those using it have neither the brains nor the understanding to accept these stories as fiction and enjoy them as such. OK, you dont like it - be constructive not insulting.

Anyway, do keep writing and take no notice of the idiots.

pathetic people

Ignore tall the positive comments. STOP WRITING THIS BULLSHIT. At the very least put it int he FETISH or GROUP GROPE category.

Loved it, hope for more.

You are truly a sick fucking Brit cuck.

Looking forward to the next instalment

Once I get really HOT I'm really insatiable. I love rubbing my pussy drenched panties firmly against guys crotches. It usually instantly makes a guy hard. I love the feel of it firmly against me!

If I'm in the mood, I usually have it pounding me deeply soon after.

Orpheum69

HOT!!!, HOT!!!, HOT!!! Thanks for a great little turn-on!! Good naughty fun!!! Well done!!!