All Comments on 'Awakening Eve Ch. 01'

I love this story and can't wait for it to continue.

Why are you reading the comments? You should be busy writing the next chapter! Now go!

to read a story that is both hot & well-written. I agree completely with the other reviewers -- please don't make us wait for the next chapter! One small suggestion: there's a name inconsistency early in the story ("Sarah," rather than "Eve"). I mention this only because it's a little disorienting. Otherwise, great story, & PLEASE keep writing!!

"I knew your story would be great, but this surpassed my expectations. "Awakening Eve" is extremely hot, extremely well written. I like a writer who knows what to do with the English language and who can make me very horny at the same time. Can't wait for Part II.

BRAVO! Please don't make me wait for more! I loved that your story is both sensual and well written. The first chapter has left me hot and wanting more.

Great story, and very well written. So, where's Part II?

Where are Thomas and Claude when I need them? LOL Can't wait for the next one!

This was one hott story ... I likie much!

Sensual and dominating these men are. I don't like to read the crap about torture unless it's sweet torture, which comes from built up desire. Getting that way throgh forcd stimulation is always so...liberating. I love your characters. Write on, darlin...;)

Wow! I would do Eve in a minute. Well, I think I'd take a little more time than that. Please, write more!

A few wierd things... "knows his way around a vulva" seemed cheesy to me. You called her Sarah at one point in the beginning. I think Thomas is a really strange character. The way he talks and what he says is like he's either from another country or another time. Having said that!!! I actually really liked it. Gave it a 5. Love where it's going. I will be reading the other chapters. Great job! Thanks and keep writing!

WOW! You are just awesome! Would pleeese never stop writing?

Oh, my, I have to change my panties, my little pussy is so wet, yikes. I would love to work for that guy, I can't wait to read more. Thanks for getting me so worked up I can't stop touching myself, mmmmmmmm. xoxo lacyracheau@yahoo.com

found it in the favorites list of someone who favorited me. glad I did! on yo read the other chapters

This was so well written. I mean, damn. I'm soaked and I haven't touched myself.

This is good. I need more. Hell, I want this. Because I'd be just as shy and not a fake shy either. Fuuhhhh

- Akuji Desdemona Narcissa