All Comments on 'Baby Girl Ch. 01'

wow, i thought this was an awesome first chapter to this story...it's so descriptive! and thank goodness it's not all about sex, i really like it!

Very well written, but lacking as far as sex is concerned.

Even without any sex scenes, it kept me reading. Looking forward to more.

I am looking forward to reading more.

Please carry on, I would like to learn more about the two of them!

THX

John

In this age of multiculturism interracial relationships have an especially poignant meaning. You write well and I loved this beginning of what will surely become one of my favorite stories. Please keep up the good work and ignore the little minds. BWWM Rule!

Don

Please, do not keep us waiting for more. Very well written. I'm looking forward to how you will handle the sexy scenes :).

Your style of writing is very enjoyable, I look forward to reading more of what happens..

Very few chapter 1's have let me in suspense, but yours has. I loved it and I hope you keep it coming!

This is a very well written first chapter. I was wondering if you were published and had any completed works? If not, I think you should look into it.-C

Nice Job! Keep writing please!

It's been a while, but give us more!

PLEASE PLEASE finish your story!!! It was wonderful and I TRULY enjoy your writing style. If you have any published or even more unpublished work PLEASE do ALL the readers the honor of allowing us to spend another moment in time with them!!!!

So it's been a couple of months...please don't leave us hanging!

Please update the story. I love the way it has started and me being a romantic I need the rest especially since this is up my ally. Hook it up girlfriend and soon.

Get back to me if you want misnikkij19@hotmail.com with a little info at least.

There are so many possiblities to this little tale of yours. You've got to finish...it seems it could be a wonderful love story.

Hi there. I would love to see an update.

PLEEEAAASSEEE!

If you could update that would be great because this is a great start and would really like to read more.

The beginning of this story has so much promise and I'm glad you haven't abandoned it.

Can't wait to read what happens next!!

Her guy sounds soooo sexy!