All Comments on 'Babydoll Ch. 18'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Love your story, but enough is enough let Ashley and Jim be together forever happily. Every chapter I get hopeful then they are torn back apart. We want happily ever after for them. I hope that happens soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

1 more chapter to where jim and ashley do stay together and the family approves

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

yep, high time they ended up together with no third wheel involved. And finally him showing the growth in knowing where his heart lies and n more being tempted to be wit other as shown here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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Please give us more an keep Ashley and Jimmy together forever. That's the only way it feels right.

mrsugarlovermrsugarloverover 6 years ago
Feels so right

These two belong together. Cream and Sugar!

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