All Comments on 'BabySitter and the Hot Tub'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yawn

Same story written over and over again. Time to evolve or retire Ashson.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yawn, Yawn

I think the last line in your Biography sums it all up.

AshsonAshsonover 5 years agoAuthor
Dear Anonymous

Over sixty million views and it shows no sign of slowing down.

It appears that people think I'm doing something right.

It may not be great literature but it's fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Well written, very enjoyable

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Even worse proofreading than your usual, amazingly enough in such a short story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Clean up by mrs wilson

You could have added a lot more to this story, it was still very good.

Anonymous
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