All Comments on 'Babysitting Trouble Ch. 05'

i think this story has excellent humiliation, and i admit to getting wet while reading, but this premise of a super religious household is a bit strange. nevertheless, love the story and hope the babysitter is further enslaved. love the idea of the piercings. maybe a collar or something else is in order? hot!

Agreed, awesome humiliation. Reminds me of a favorite of mine, Owned Teacher. The super religious dad is a strange twist, but so what.

not so sure I like the religious angle seems a bit far fetched .... but am interested in where you take it next will Harry take her for the piercings maybe or even a chastity belt to protect her for himself.... but this is your story not mine so keep writing I love all your stories

Nice job, but it seems like you are stretching for ideas at the moment. How about a visit to the tattoo/piercing parlor...tried and true humiliation highlight

a little redundant at times--half the dialogue could have been cut, and the story would be left unchanged.

still, it got me going ;P

This is my second time reading it and still as erotic as ever. Thanks

This writing for this series is sloppy, messy, and so very hot, just like Sara's well fucked mouth, cunt and ass ;)