All Comments on 'Back Door to Heaven'

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DarkkBrothaOneDarkkBrothaOnealmost 6 years ago
Not bad

I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Very descriptive and good use of the language. Ending could've use a little work....maybe write a companion to it to finish with the main charater. But overall...I think this is a good read. Also enjoyed the favt your charaters were black. We need more of this on the site. Keep up the good work!!!

red9assassinred9assassinabout 8 years ago

YOU GOTTA MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
what it really needs

is a friggin' sequel

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
dont stop now

a good start. what a story but a prequill woud be nice

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