All Comments on 'Backpack Vacation Set-Up'

Absolutely glorious fantasy.No point in analyzing anything as we all know Tina will succome to mikes "unwitting" charms,sooner than later.Great story well written,easy reading no issues morally,look forward to next submission.

Hopefully there will be more.

Keep the story going please

finish the story! great story, thanks so much for sharing

A standard "suck and fuck" story. Erotic, descriptive, but standard

You need to continue this story!!!!!

Please continue. I hope the rest of the story is as exciting.

An excellent tale, thought it could be a little longer and you could have made a second chapter if you had wanted to, and find I believe it would still be just as good.

Hated the scene of the waitress in the restroom. Could not continue reading.

and should be banned!! I gave this a 5

Good story, got exactly what I expected but i will say the ending felt kinda abrupt. After the beginning i expected them to go hiking and for the seduction to take longer.

Loved it, a good read. I would love some more chapters to this to see how things pan out on the hike, the fun they have along the way and what the ending is. So will they stay together or does he meet some one else?

I was once set up in a similar situation. It was such a reminiscing experience to read.(5*)

great story. will you tell us about the hikin trip? i hope so!

You are killing me with this one, I knew it would be this way when I got to the end of page one. Please finish this one, I thought maybe Tina was going to get involved as well.

In response to linnear: No, Tina doesn't need to get involved, though I can see the two couples doing their respective things openly in the presence of the other. There is room to continue the story, of course -- it isn't clear how the relationship between Mike and Carol will (or won't) progress -- but partner swapping seems out of character based on what I've seen so far.

I love the surroundings, and enjoyed all the sex... would have needed something a bit more creative to get to 5 stars for me

Good story. Would like to read another chapter or two.

Just a little too much...

Good story, though she started very quickly. A little build up would have been good. Some additional chapters would be good as well.

Nice first chapter; what happens next?

Who needs to hike? :+)))

Let's just stay here!

This author sure is casual about disease and pregnancy.

where is the rest of it.