by m_storyman_x
Good story, though she started very quickly. A little build up would have been good. Some additional chapters would be good as well.
I love the surroundings, and enjoyed all the sex... would have needed something a bit more creative to get to 5 stars for me
In response to linnear: No, Tina doesn't need to get involved, though I can see the two couples doing their respective things openly in the presence of the other. There is room to continue the story, of course -- it isn't clear how the relationship between Mike and Carol will (or won't) progress -- but partner swapping seems out of character based on what I've seen so far.
You are killing me with this one, I knew it would be this way when I got to the end of page one. Please finish this one, I thought maybe Tina was going to get involved as well.
I was once set up in a similar situation. It was such a reminiscing experience to read.(5*)
Loved it, a good read. I would love some more chapters to this to see how things pan out on the hike, the fun they have along the way and what the ending is. So will they stay together or does he meet some one else?
Good story, got exactly what I expected but i will say the ending felt kinda abrupt. After the beginning i expected them to go hiking and for the seduction to take longer.
and should be banned!! I gave this a 5
Hated the scene of the waitress in the restroom. Could not continue reading.
An excellent tale, thought it could be a little longer and you could have made a second chapter if you had wanted to, and find I believe it would still be just as good.
Absolutely glorious fantasy.No point in analyzing anything as we all know Tina will succome to mikes "unwitting" charms,sooner than later.Great story well written,easy reading no issues morally,look forward to next submission.