by bzzzman
Mo’s innocent ho from the mosque is now showing both ankles and an elbow to the blasphemous camel jockey Jamaal.
Fantastic can't wait for the next chapter
I'm really hooked on this story. I can't hardly wait until the next installment.
Ed
Loving the series, it keeps getting interesting by the chapter. Hope you update soon, thanks.
This series was very good from the start; but with these latest two entries (I just got caught up yesterday) it's really proven itself a winner.
The central couple is endearing, the tone feels believable, and the pace is wonderfully controlled. You've cleverly laid a lot of crumbs to lead the reader forward along a gentle path to greater adventure for our heroes, yet you throw in unexpected zingers (I thought the hardware'd be an earring!) too!
It's a sexy blend of suspense and romance, and wherever it takes us I think it'll be very entertaining to get there. The central premise about their religious background, as others have commented, feels very real to anyone who's 'been there', which only enriches what is a very fun and sexy journey.
Really fine series. Your characters smack of reality, as do the situations you create for them. The pace is wonderful. Your descriptions are vivid, and your prose both simple and eloquent. Fine work! Can't wait for the next installment.
Once you open your eyes just a little bit, you get to see a lot and it makes you want to open them more. Unfortunately, it usually takes a while to outgrow the conditioning of the blind past.
This is interesting, nicely paced, sexy, believeable, and romantic. All of us that know, or have known. religious people that have "backslid" can identify with it. This story has been written with some humor and a lot of thought. It's just a real nice series.