All Comments on 'Backstage Romance Ch. 01'

I love the extra layers added by star/regular person and professional behavior/personal attraction. I understand the decision to tell the story from both sides; it works well in the beginning for explaining actions and reactions. However, once you get them together you might find it a burden to keep that up.

Im hooked! Great first chapter, cant wait to see how things progress.

I really enjoyed the first 2 chapters, keep them coming.

Well done! More please! Soon please!

When do we learn about TIm?

I like where this is going but yes what did Tim do? Who hurt Daniel to make him so shy too?

Wow, thanks for the great comments, everyone! That's so incredibly gratifying to a first-timer. Since you were so encouraging, I went ahead and submitted chapter 2 this morning. Assuming it gets approved, look for it later this week. I'm only partway through the story, though, so I doubt I'll be able to keep my submissions that frequent for long. For those asking about Tim, yes, he's important, but you'll have to be patient for a while to find out how and when the past will rear its immaculately groomed head!

Wonderful story start, love Daniel and Jeff, hope there's more soon.

The only words that come to mind are"More, please!"

Love it so far, am just about to start ch.2 but didn't want to miss the opportunity to comment on ch.1

Can't wait and hope this simmers for a good stretch.

Have you been following me? :) I swear this is so real because I've had this happen to me. good job.

My background is drama (h.s. and university) so I love this story so far.

Highly recommended for readers who like GM romance garnished with some hot erotic sauce and a bit of heartache. And all the chapters are in, so no waiting in suspense anymore. I'm impressed with this story and looking forward to your next series, hope you start one soon.

You, are an excellent writer, Sir! Loving the story.

I'm loving where this is going,,,

Your writing skills are wonderful..from the characters to the plot to how you set the scenes..excited to read the rest of your story!