All Comments on 'Bad Penny Ch. 07'

by MVPrimetime

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CeliaisAlienaCeliaisAlienaalmost 12 years ago
Reconnections and new connections

A delightful erotic idyll, somewhat restorative of the old emotional balance among the characters (even if it is to get unbalanced soon enough again!) and full of wildhearted erotic experimentations. Some of the saga's hottest sex thus far is contained here, along with further fetishistic horizons, new players, and one major bombshell 'complication' of sorts.

It is a relief to have Sean resolidify his feelings for Penny; and she, as much as ever, is a strangely delicate erotic heroine, loveable and relateable even as she bursts through endless boundaries. The reader's emotional investment in these characters only continues to deepen.

MVPrimetimeMVPrimetimealmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks again!

Your comments are much appreciated. As I have remarked before feedback is a big part of the reason I publish these stories. Of course I am again perplexed by getting a vote of 'one' (and a 'three') from someone who cannot be bothered to comment - I don't mind the low vote that much (okay,truth be told I am cut to the quick and flipping between mortal offence and dark despair, but hey, I'll get over it. Eventually) but I really would like to know why such a low mark - if it is really so bad that it rates a '1' then kindly say why. Even anonymously. Although if you have an opinion that strong then the courage to voice it should not be hard to find.

spearishspearishabout 11 years ago
Erotica restored slightly

Strangely the simple one on one at the start of this chapter recovered the eroticism for me .You know the saying you can have too much of a good thing ? Sadly that seems to be the truth in the later group scenes .Still impeccable writing regarding the scene setting .

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A series everyone should read!

I am convinced, now that I am re-reading the chapters, that within this story are some of the most profound thoughts on love and loss. I think there is an emerging thread regarding satisfaction - could the genie of multiple partners,totally uninhibited sex ever be put back in the bottle? If so when could it have happened or when could it? I must be careful not to let my knowledge of how the tale develops influence my comments and possibly spoil the enjoyment of future readers so based on what has happened so far it is clear there is strong love between the characters based on physical attraction and everything else which influences that most profound of emotions. But they are changing and it seems not all the changes sit comfortably with the main couple. Thanks

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The story of my life is not as interesting as the versions of that story that I write and submit here. I am not fast at writing, so please bear with me. Now that the Bad Penny story has been completed (witht eh Always turns up sequel) I have to admit that "If I Knew Then.. "...

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