All Comments on 'Badass Ch. 03'

hope more chapters come just as fast. this has become one of my favorites here.

Really enjoying this story. Can't wait for next installment!!!

Can't wait for more currently my most looked forward to story thus far.

It's just cruel not to finish.

lol oh that was funny, arms full of groceries an he had her entire clan at a stand still, cant wait to read more from you.

Loved it, but you made a couple of minor errors. Just asking, do you proof read, draft and then edit? Or do you just write?

the hole AE thing reminds me of a video game from years back called bloody roar

fantastic platform!!!

Waiting for new chapter....

great story, can't wait for more.

It was a great story but would have been better had the 1st half of the story not been a repeat of the last chapter.

Keep it up! Nice new world! New and exciting personalities, can't wait to see where this is headed.

Great story so far, but where are the vampire's....lol

Truly you have a great imagination and I appreciate reading a story that does not seem to follow the cookie cutter "worlds" so many stories are using these days.

I rarely comment on the stories I read but felt I had to with this one.

Keep up the good work!

The writing still needs quite a bit of work, but that will come with time. The story, though... It's very interesting so far, and much different than anything else I have read on this site in a long while.

Keep up the good work. Your story and writing can only get better from here.

Caleb

It feels like I'm reading a super wierd dragon ball series. Keep it up and I'll keep readin. 5 stars. Can't wait for more.

I enjoyed it, cant wait till the next chapter.

I love this series. Please keep them coming. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

erm please write more!!!!

Dont' worry about the comments, just write some more ok, getting bored, need to read more, want to read more. Give me more.

I'm starting to like that arrogant bastard. Great chapter.

Jeans that flair? Hair clips? for a man? Youve got to change those statements. Im just imagining him walking around with little girly butterfly clips in his hair now. You could say bootcut or loosefit jeans. Just threw me for a loop laughing a bit.

this story has a great story line and the fact that sex isn't in every chapter is a good thing i like how you are building your story line

Nuff said

JC

p.s. i'm a continuation writer, and some people have asked me to finish your story. Its awesome and i'm enjoying reading it. If you see this, please mail me and we can work something out

wow the mc is such an ass haha

you told the stoy 2 times waist of time. i do like the storie