All Comments on 'Bait a Hook Ch. 06'

I really do enjoy reading your story and these guys make a cute couple. Would you please make the chapters longer to read. So far the story is excellent

No really, I love it but if you could make them a little longer it would be even better!

I agree i'd like longer, but b/c it's a good story. I enjoy these two boys. I hope you can tell us more about them. I guess having them talking to one another is the best way.They were pretty hot when not talking too. lol I love how Rob must feel every time Becky is all over him. It seems these two won't keep the secret forever with how obvious they are about their feelings. They are clearly falling fast. I appreciate your putting out frequent updates which balances them being short...I'd probably like it a bit less often (ok not really lol) and a bit longer though. Keep it comin.

I like the story, but 'waste' is rubbish. The word you wanted is 'waist'.

'The gorgeous muscles on his stomach and chest stood out and the soft layer of hair was captured beautifully.' Nice & naughty chapter. Loved the shirt bit.

Your author name intrigued me as I also am from VA. I am loving this story, as I never had the experience of loving a classmate in HS. Hell, I wasn't even out to myself in HS. I was actually 32 before I even accepted myself as gay - all those wasted years.

THIS IS VERY GOOD BUT THE CHAPTERS ARE A BIT SHORT LOL

Would be even better with some elaboration.