All Comments on 'Bait and Switch Ch. 02'

Very curious about the pink creatures and the dream question...

Hurry up with the next installment.

Awesome story! I want the next part!

nice!!

Just playing around. I am really into the story, can't even wait to start the next chapter!

Good shit Maynard!

Story seems good so far but the names could be a bit more original. The main character is somewhat telepathic and you give him Xavier as a last name. And here we see Bradley Cooper who is an actor in reality. Also I feel you should have other characters say the main character's name a bit more often. Two chapters and only one mention of his first name.

5 stars

Good writing

Super plot

Thanks ♥️ jUqQLS