All Comments on 'Bait Girl'

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 9 years ago
New favorite author!

Great story...I'm looking forward to reading all of your stuff.

SuthrnlvrSuthrnlvrover 9 years ago
Awesome

Simply fantastic story, looking for more. 5 stars!!!

parawaparawaover 9 years ago
More please....

I love the idea, well described. 5*

NateBiDudeNateBiDudeover 9 years ago
Hot and intelligent

This was hot as hell. Loved the narrator's voice. This is an example of intelligently written erotica. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I love that he cherished and respected her. That tone is rare and really appreciated. I could see wanting to explore wild sex with him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Extremely well written

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