All Comments on 'Banking Privately'

I would like to submit an application to be a guard!

Well done indeed in all areas and strong, strong contender for story if not novella of the year. Elizabeth's disinclination to tread upon the B&L logo and the final security search of Number Four are just two of the many elements that set this story apart from the usual BDSM tale. Guessing that Elizabeth is awarded the position but your character development of Number Two has me pulling for Cynthia somehow earning

a job as well. And I do mean earning it. Awaiting the next installment, I am thinking most readers will be as breathless and fretful as the ladies contending for the privilege of serving B&L.

I did enjoy this well-written and very hot and steamy story. You seem to offer further chapters with the last sentence; I do hope they will be forthcoming!

An excellent piece of work, well worthy of the five stars I have given it. Thank you.

Please continue indeed. Your stories are a breath of erotic air missing from many writings.

This isn't BDSM, this is non-con. If you're going to subject characters to rape and blackmail, categorize it properly, because it damages your story when you're substituting enslavement for submission.

This story was one of my favorites so far! I hope there are more chapters coming!

More of that please!

I am anxious to read more of this story. What will happen on day 2???

Anxiously awaiting the next installment of this story and ANYTHING else you write with the stockings/BDSM combination. There's not enough of that around, especially with your quallity of writing. You engage the reader to want to know more and I personally wished I was one of the characters! Summary... MORE!!! WHEN AND HOW SOON???

... but I loved it anyway.

Looking forward to read the continuation.

Read this story a few years ago and returned hoping for a sequel. I rate this story in my top ten of the thousands I have perused. I implore you to consider a sequel.

Very good read....Erotic & sexy. You should not leave your audience hanging like this. A 2nd chapter needs to be written on what happens the next day !!