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by Hellen_S

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Getting the pool terminology correct would improve the story. But the main line was very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Could Have Been Good

The story had potential, but the writing, spelling, and grammar mistakes made it very hard to read!!

chen969chen969over 13 years ago
Great

Loved the story and added it to my private collection (where I made some tweaks).

rolferolfeover 13 years ago
great a real turnon keep the stories coming

great its a real turn on for me keep up the good work

ChantillyLace14ChantillyLace14about 14 years ago

Aside from minor typos, this story was very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
awesome!

Your story was amazing!

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very good.

This was a good story.I wish that I read it before.But ware are the pics?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Discovered Treasure

Thanks, Helen, for a wonderful story. I loved it and can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
This is a great story

Helen you are amazing! You write amazing stories, you look hot! Great pictures!!! I adore your stories

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