All Comments on 'Barbara's First Lover Ch. 01'

Sad little man.

please

Extremely erotic! Excellent!

Pathetic little man who gets his rocks off by losing his wife

Lets hope the next and final chapter is one paragraph long and tells how he discovers he is nothing but a waste of oxygen and puts everyone out of our misery at the end of a rope

HOW? WHY?

You have so richly yet concisely captured the exquisite desire of a husband wanting his wife to fuck other men. To those who don't share this fantasy, it surely seems odd, but to those who do, this story is a fantastic first chapter. Also loved the self-denial, that hubby didn't want to have sex until after she'd been taken by her lover.

One request for future chapters: NO CONDOMS for Barbara's lovers!

What there is so far is not terrible. Some nice phrasing and you do get right to the heart of the matter. What can I say, its 'bilogical'!

"He let his jocks full to the ground", what in the hell does that mean? A good editor and/or proofreader would do this a world of good. Then you have a woman that hates her husband and a wannabe gay in the story. Why did you put in it LW? The real question you can answer if you have a second part, is why the wife hates her husband so much that she wants to destroy him as a man. Then consider why the male character in the story has the desire to be a pimp offering his woman to other men and why he wants to be a gay male. This doesnt belong in LW it belongs in gay or fetish.

You write what you are little sick one and leave no value as no one let - alone yourself - respect you.<P>

There isn't much to reason why you exist as your jaded mind is nearly numb and life hasn't much more for you left.<P>

So why bother - just go away and seek help before its too late.<P>

To be clear - this sick fetish isn't erotic or arousing - its just self disrespect with sought male humiliation - how sad for those around you.

Anyone who makes the effort to leave little bitch comments on these stories is obviously SO INSECURE with their own sexuality and masculinity or they simply wouldn't bother writing anything. GET OVER IT GUYS - JUST JACK OFF AND ENJOY!!

and bend over. I'll boink u, so u won't need her to live your phantasies 4 u.

All cuckold stories are bad, but this was really bad. If author writing his own fantasy, he is a limp wristed, wimpy, pussy. His words.

Hubby should just start wearing panties and calling himself Sue. He isn’t a man and is just a sick little perverted boy. Another cuck and slut story. Are you surprised? This site is overrun with them and they are getting more disgusting and pathetic