All Comments on 'Bare Foot On His Porch'

Husband and wife need to discuss her feelings before this goes any further, or this marriage is in trouble.

Short and sweet - any more to follow?

I liked the story and I appreciated its brevity. However, when you allow a sentence such as the following to remain standing, my appreciation dims, decreases, diminishes, and drops dead: "She then went on to explain how her and her husband wanted to do something similar and noticed his."

"Wanted to do" is a verb within a clause; and you think that "her" and her husband is the subject of the verb? Think again.

I would have had him welcome her into his home, and then seduce her. Show her that he can take her to a state of bliss that her husband can't. Send her home with a pussy full of cum and her mind filled with erotic thoughts of him.It's a good story, just a little short,and needs a follow-up chapter to get the little girl to cheat on her husband. Thanks....Rich

where is the rest?