All Comments on 'Barely Legal Ch. 01'

That was probably every adult males fantasy. I enjoyed it but are you going to develop it or is this it.

Thanks for the story. Whether it proves to be a stand alone or a continuing epic, it works very well. You have sketched the characters very nicely, especially the girl. And the sex scenes were well written. Thanks for the turn-on!

Loved it! I'll be looking out for ch 02....

Lukas

As your other comments have said, I would love to see more of this couple and especially that very sexy little girl; she is the meat of all men's fantasies! Almost a baby but just tiny like that - such a turn on!

Thanks to everyone for the nice comments. I'm currently finishing Chapters 2 and 3 and will be posting them soon. After that, I'm not sure where the characters will go, but I already know they'll be back.

You are very good at what you do. Makes me wanna fuck an older man like that. I'm 24 I think 35 is a good age. Hmmm I wonder...grin...lol

keep this story going i cant wait to read the next part which is up now well got to go lol. "jakk"

keep this story going i cant wait to read the next part which is up now well got to go lol. "jakk"

Very nicely done! I kinda think the Characters make such a cute couple.

Do you take requests for stories? Because I have a little fantasy, and I'd love for you to write something on it...

i loved this story it reminded me of my first time

a huge cock and a tight pussy you wet me to the core

If it were my sweet little 19 year old girl, I'd be looking to kick some 35 year old ass! Since she isn't and I've been the 35 year old, I'll just forget it happened. At least until it happens again...And it will...sometime...Hot!

it's really nice. thanks for this wonderful story. my email eg2167@yahoo.com

AWESOME story.

How can this be a first time?

Sensual and Hott.

Can’t wait for the next e.