by CrazzyGuy
Good chapter overall. I really want to know what the tats on Owen are. I like the developments but it didn't quite make sense to me why Iris wouldn't have mated him if she wanted his 'power' behind her. I would think she couldn't overcome his free will and have him allow her to use him if he is an Alpha. If he is, I wonder what she can hope to do about it? I'd think having mated him would be the best attachment she could get.
Anyhow, I like the developments. I am wondering if in your world of weres whether the wolf recognizes a mate or if any two wolves can mate. In other words, is Kara a possible mate to him? Maybe you can have Jason ask since Iris mentioned mating with him. I have a feeling Kara isn't going to be happy to find out he went after her brother without her.
keep writing!
It's an intriguing set up for a paranormal tale.
But I was stumped by the description of the MCU guy who's a witch. How can someone be Hispanic but not Latino?
@Gimlet, in regards to Santiago, he's Spanish-American, but not Latin American. You'll find out a bit more about him in the next chapters, but he's from across the pond.
@cannd, patience, all will be revealed. Don't y'all worry, I'm not the kind of author who likes leaving around loose ends.
LOVE this story!! Good storyline so far and great characters!!! Bring on the next chapter...as I'm becoming a typical impatient woman!!!!! ;)
When it's darn well ready. :P Chapter 4's about...halfway done. Need to figure out where I want some certain things to do.