All Comments on 'Basic Instincts'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Titillating story

Please send a sequel, preferably a nenage.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
needs work

The gross factual errors about police work make it hardly credible. Non-uniformed UK officers do not carry concealed weapons, DI's do not cover for uniformed patrols and cautions can only be given at police stations and require an admission of guilt - just for starters. The relationship between the women has no passion and just seems a pantomime without much interest. Why hetero sex in a lesbian story? Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great story.

I loved reading this story. Please continue writing this story as it needs a sequel. Hope you post the next part soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
2nd chapter please.

Love this story, it is fantastic. It requires a second chapter or three. Do not let the air head below bother you about the errors in police work.

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