by franco89
The gross factual errors about police work make it hardly credible. Non-uniformed UK officers do not carry concealed weapons, DI's do not cover for uniformed patrols and cautions can only be given at police stations and require an admission of guilt - just for starters. The relationship between the women has no passion and just seems a pantomime without much interest. Why hetero sex in a lesbian story? Sorry.
I loved reading this story. Please continue writing this story as it needs a sequel. Hope you post the next part soon.
Love this story, it is fantastic. It requires a second chapter or three. Do not let the air head below bother you about the errors in police work.