All Comments on 'Bath Time'

hard to find a better story than that!

Are you sure about that coolomon? I'm sorry to say, but I've read much better.

Was this the story that inspired the thread in "story ideas"? If so, the "build up" was not worth it.

I loved the story. It was sweet and soft with nice descriptions based almost entirely on the acts involved. She avoided the pitfalls of excessive character descriptions that can feel like dull lists of characteristics or, even worse, cliche driven analogies between body parts and inanimate objects.

Perhaps the anonymous poster didn't read very carefully and clearly didn't see dates. This story was accepted and posted months before my thread came out, so there is a huge chronological issue he/she missed. Not to mention I'm female, the author is female, and that was clearly NOT a lesbian story. Perhaps the annonymous person that posted should go back through and actually READ the story instead of being a conspiracy theory reactionary that clearly misses subtle details because they're too busy missing the big picture.

Very descriptive. It's nice to share, especially when it's with your best friend. I enjoyed it.