All Comments on 'Dirty Dancing'

Thanks for that - Hot as Hell!!!

It was a very good story, I liked the part with Joan most of all, Sarah was also hot until the Anal sex, I don't know why so many stories have to have anal sex, don't get me wron I've done it a few times, but it's dirty and nasty if not done right and a car is not the place to have shit all over the place.

As far as Joan's Hymen it should have been broken as soon as Todd's finger were in her.

If not for those two points your story would have been five stars.

Hot it was - and the author avoided one of the memes of defloration (the guy's penis penetrates some inches before it comes in contact with the hymen) AND the author addressed - in an offhand manner, but addressed - birth control in the sense of the morning after pill. These - for me - made the story much more interesting - closer to something that might really have happened

On the other hand, the author employed the standard defloration memes of the multi-orgasmic virgin and the guy with no refractory period. These are so hackneyed - still, a pretty good story

Reminds me of a time long ago and faraway - warm nights and even hotter bodies, Nice job!

I do so wish my first time had been like that.

All he wanted was his rocks off and no idea how to begin to make it pleasurable for me. In, out, cum,- before I barely knew what had happened.

There were no morning after pills back then and he didn't use a condom and had made no effort to pull out.

I worried until my next period.

I want more of Joan and Sarah's adventures. I want to read about Sarah teaching Joan about the sex toys, and then perhaps the two girls having an orgy with two guys they just met.

I want to see Joan give in to her sexuality

I want more of Joan's sexual journey and Sarah teaching her to being a total slut

Absolutely amazing...!

It was a pleasure reading such a well-written story. Grammatically great, well crafted pacing, and realistic. Thank you.