All Comments on 'Battle of Wills Ch. 03'

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Anonymousalmost 16 years ago

Too short!

Nice series so far, but this part seems rushed and therefore less satisfying. Keep up the effort!

ArrowDel almost 16 years agoAuthor

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It was rushed actually...I needed something to get her into the room for the next bit to work...which I hope turns out better than it sounded to myself a few minutes ago before I submitted it. :/

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