All Comments on 'Battle of Wills Ch. 04'

Sooo gotta find out if he ever realizes that he does know her! Please post more!

Sooo hope you continue this! Sooo gotta find out if he finally recognizes her

intriguing! I like your heroine and oddly w/ all of his jerky behavior you aren't making me dislike your hero. But I am intrigued about their past together - did they love each other, friends, what exactly happened? please continue!

this is how I've always pictured my married life would be, an equal battle of forced submission. I'm very sad this story ends where it does, The ending is completely missing, but it's a good start =D

But they're way too short. Keep at it though