All Comments on 'Battle Scars Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great series! One of the best I've read!

Man, this is getting really hot!I never thought about the possibilities of a legless woman before. Thanks!

catman71catman71over 12 years ago
great

sad that they are in the conditions they are in, but they are written so lovingly( not to mention with such black humor to the conditions) that i cannot but help visualize the scenes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Great Job! 5 stars! Please keep this story going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
more?

There is more story to be told here. Does Gabby stay with Pooh and Piglet, or does she find someone of her own? I think a description of anal sex with Gabby would be interesting here. Can Gabby get pregnant, carry a child to term? What about Annie and David, is there a possibility of children in the future for them? If not, could Gabby have David's baby and they all three raise it together? Tell us where life takes them, at least an Epilogue for those of us who got themselves wrapped up in these people's lives - please!

arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
Loved it...loved it...loved it!!!!

Awaiting Chapter 6!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
very nice story

Loved it. It was funny, tragic and erotic all in one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I loved your story but also hate it because it seems you have not finished it. Why do you and a lot of other writers not finish the stories????

old_riderold_riderover 4 years ago
PLEASE keep this series going

This is a great series. Please get your creative vibe going. I think this could go in several directions. All of which could be great.

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