All Comments on 'Be Mine'

Normally when I read most of these stories I just pass three things by. This may sound a bit much but I love this story so much I made an account and a.m. taking the time to leave comments. Thank you for this entertaining and enlightening short story. I look forward to more of your pieces ^^

Truly great love story, I even shed some tears.

I cried so much, got aroused, was very excited in so many parts of the story, and so wish you would make another story. As a female, I've always wanted to be a male and your story lightened me up to coming out. I'm afraid of coming out, but this story really helped. Thank you~ ❤️

I want to see them married and Adrian got pregnant with Zach's children!!!!sweet couples....

wow, just wow...such a warm, sweet story...it ended too soon, i wish there was more...

I think there is something in my eye. U r just great. Love ur stories.😍

There are some minor errors which are a little distracting but it's a good story. More of a sweet love story.

This story made me bawl my eyes out!!! Made me laugh. of cz now I'm suspicious of my friends...since I'm as gay as anything. You're good author....xoxoxoxoxo

Being Valentines Day I had to come and revel in Adrian and Zach's story. Have read it dozens of times, the ending makes me that happy.

This was great and i cried for the couple you put so much emotion in it

is there going to be another chapter. PLEASE!!!!!

Absolutely phenomenal story! I was so disappointed when the story ended. I wanted more. A sequel might spoil it. I will content myself with reading anything else you have written as I am sure I will not be disappointed.

Please write more.

This is sooooo good. I wish there was more of this story. Please add some more!!!

Sachiaiko is too amazing. I've read this story over 14 times, honestly.

More please. I cannot explain how I need more of this please!!

His sats would be dropping, (as in oxygen saturation) rather than his stats!

Sometimes it is hard to face the fact of gay love, but Zach and Adrian were able to do that and act upon it.

I felt a bit sorry for Sandy who was "used" in a way, but she was certainly gracious and forgiving in facing this fact.

As for Scott:- What an arsehole! And how could somebody keep kicking someone when he was down? and Zach was so ashamed of himself that he did not resist.

But what a wonderful little fellow Alan proved to be.

Keep writing, Sachiaiko, but always let Love triumph!

Thank you

Great love story, When I was in college my best friend was a girl chasing guy. A popular jock that was so "straight" and super good looking we were friends. Then one night he came onto me I told him to stop kidding around because he was taking the joke too far. It turns out he had a crush on me for years and just could not come to terms with being a star football player and being gay. He told me that he could not take it any more and that he did not care who know. It was great because I had crush on him too. We were friends and now great loves. He waited till his senior year and football season was over. His fellow players and coaches were shocked and could not believe it. What can I tell you but he was a good actor. His parents were not happy at first but came around in a few months to accept their son and me as lovers. They already knew me for years as their son's best friend. They treated me just like one of their family and my family knew I was gay and was glad I found someone special.

Awesome story! I hope you keep this story going I read this one to my boyfriend and we didn't want it to end

I don't know how often I reread this story.

Not only that it is really well written, it is just so touching.

I exactly know what is going to happen and everytime I dread the moment when everything is going to fall apart.

Every single time I start to cry, I just can't help it.

Thank you very much.

A wonderful, touching love story. Thank you for sharing your talent with us! :) I like how real the story felt... It wasn't all sunshine and rainbows - the characters had to struggle through challenges to find their happiness.

As others have said, spelling/grammar issues are a distraction; they pull us away from the plot (your/you're, posessive "s" vs. pluralization, licking vs. liking, etc.). Something to work on to make your stories flow more smoothly.

Hope you keep writing! I'll definitely favourite you and read your other works.

This story was well written, heartwarming and lovely. I loved the true emotions involved. Well done.

I laughed I cried got angry it was an emotional rollercoaster thanks for the story

This is so beautiful ❣️. I love the plot and The characters are wonderful . Thanks ✨

I loved this story. This is the 2nd time reading it & it is a beautiful Love Story. I just wish people would stop complaining about errors it just drives me nuts, if they think it's so easy than let them write stories here.

Loved it. I'm going to read your other stories now ...

Glad I don't have to _live_ that emotional rollercoaster (being straight is still so much simpler). Reading it gets through the hellish part faster.

I hate adrian for doing that to zack.. and most importantly hurting sandy. It really hurts when someone uses you just as a cover..

Omg I’d love to see a more detailed story on like ao3 or Wattpad. Maybe more on their relationship after they got out of the hospital? How Adrian’s family reacted for some good angst? All in all I think this story was way too good to be on a porn website lol

Beautiful, perfect, wonderful.

Great, wonderful story! Thank you!

It was a good story but there were some rotten moments, behaviors and characters in here too. Scott was a vile, homophobic, self-hating, closeted and violent gay man. The worst of the worst. Adrian’s parents seem bad but really we don’t know how they’ll react to their own son being gay - but not holding out any hope for them. Adrian was a user who deeply, savagely hurt two people he claimed to love/care for. It was repulsive that he came to Zach, drunk, seducing him and rubbing Zach’s face with pussy juice all over his fingers!! Disrespectful and unforgivable for both Zach and Sandy!! He lied to, led on, used and humiliated Sandy. He put Zach through the wringer for weeks then seduced him and denied/ betrayed him to the point Zach didn’t care if he died. On the other hand, Zach was a decent honest guy who didn’t deserve to be mistreated by Adrian but who forgave him far too easily and quickly. Sandy is a saint whose kindness and compassion needs to be rewarded. Alan is a caring guy, a good friend but needs to have more self-respect than to be abused and disrespected by Scott. I would like to read more of what happens with these characters.

This story was fantastic and I am going to read your others now. I agree that the sequel could be really interesting. The story of Scott admitting his feelings for Alan and coming to terms with them would be interesting. There could be some drama back at the home church as well. Sandy has a heart of gold and I don’t think Adrian put her through too much before the truth was known. Maybe she has a brother or sister who is gay and struggling to come out of the closet. It was done in such a loving manner and they were both so in love with each other before anything physical happened. I love the love letters from SA and how persistent Adrian was. I hope you’re still writing.

Clearly written by a woman. Ugh, what is it with chicks being so into writing gay erotica? It's just as creepy as straight guys fetishizing lesbians. Gay men (and lesbians), by default, are not interested in you sexually. They will never be into you sexually. It's just gross and predatory.

Also, the fact that as a woman, you feel you have the right to drop F-slurs because of "the angst if it all" is super offensive. If you don't run the risk of being called a f*g IRL, you shouldn't use it in fiction. It's like the n word. You don't see white authors dropping the most offensive word out there for dramatic purposes when the story doesn't need it.

If you're going to treat gay men like some little kink, maybe you could at least have the decency not to do it by unnecessarily offending the people you're lady-lusting over. That's not your word to use, dude.

Good story, would have liked it if there were more about the families reactions and how Adrian and Zach delt with the fallout. Please ignore the out off wack WOKE comments.

Very nice story. Well written.

should have pressed charges against Scott