by TexRiffraff
I really enjoyed this story and it was well written too. The final girl-girl scene was the icing on the cake.
Great, great story. Almost like reading a detailed diary entry. No reason not to believe it happened just as told.
Really good - well paced, erotic without going over the top and with well developed plotting and characters.
Only bit of constructive feedback I can think of is to add some description of the other girls - the main character is described, but I don't think anything is given to make the other characters visually distinctive. Wouldn't have to be much - just something to give the reader an idea of what they look like.
Keep up the good work!
Thankyou for sharing this lovely story. I hope you will tell us more.
RecHiker
I really enjoyed your story and the way you write. Would like to see the next installment involving these four girls soon.
that was very, very hot. Very sexy girls but never over the top. More of their adventures please.