All Comments on 'Beautiful Desire Ch. 01'

Now that was nice so what is next up with them and with mom and dad to

What's next is a surprise. I don't plan on bringing in any other characters. At lease not in the sex.

It may be a few weeks before it's out, somewhat busy, plus gotta build the suspense! :)

Some of the lines and even paragraphs are almost exactly the same as the Taming of Natalie. Any particular reason?

I don't see too much similarity in the context nor writing style between my story and Taming of Natalie. I do hope that you are not suggesting that I stole any of that work though. Considering this story has been posted since May/June of 2014 and the Author of the other story has only been a member since November..

Either way, thank you for bringing up this story. I have read all 5 chapters so far and very much enjoy it.