All Comments on 'Beauty--Remastered Ch. 10'

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ariesgirlariesgirlabout 11 years ago

That was an exciting chapter...good job.

pmpktypmpktyabout 11 years ago
awesome

I'm happy about what you said before the story started. No one is making them read this story. While I was a little annoyed with the last chapter as well I realized there is always a method to the madness. While it may not have turned out how I like in the end it will all work itself out. I'm still loving this story. It sucks that you had to go through a lot of crap, as they say life happens. Since you are considering doing more fairy tale remakes I would like to suggest The Hunchback of Notre Dame. I think it would be interesting to see your spin on it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Keep it Up!!!

I hope we don't have to wait another lifetime for an update lol. I am addicted to this story!13

islandqtislandqtabout 11 years ago
yay! you're back!

I can't wait to see where you take this. Poor Scarlet. Ihope Donovan kisses her feet from this day onward!

Luvlee11Luvlee11about 11 years ago
great story.

This is a great story. I hope hou don't make me wait a year to finish it. Keep up the good work

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12about 11 years ago
yay

So glad to see this! I think about this story alot, which makes me re-read and re-read over and over again, only to find I still love it! I hope you still love it and will continue on!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Please

Pretty please continue the writing it is so good. I'm getting addicted to it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I just want then to finally make love, that's all.

woohoo1234woohoo1234about 11 years ago
YAY

Yay finally. have been waiting for this! Can't wait for your next update!!! :)

spearishspearishabout 11 years ago
Three years and they haven't had SEX yet !!

Please give us all a nice conclusion.pretty please .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

please continue i've been waiting so long.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
its beautiful

Plzz plzz continue ..... i have been waiting forever!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

just found this! please continue!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

hello, are you still going to finish this story? :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
???

Love it!! This is one of the most intriguing stories on this site! We want to know what happens next so please finish :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

It would appear that you only need to write one more chapter to tie up all the loose ends. I hope that you do finish the story & not leave everyone hanging. You've done a marvelous job so far so please finish it

amja7578amja7578over 10 years ago

Enjoying the story so far and hoping to read some more.

There's just one thing that's been bugging me, though. At the very beginning of the story, Donovan was a real jerk bordering on psycho (forbidding her to have any contact with family or friends, keeping her locked up in his house, the whole clothes thing, etc., etc.) And I think she accepted him too quickly and too easily. I mean, she barely rebeled and then I never really understood why she apologized to him when he should've been the one to do it.

Maybe you could edit/add a few more chapters to ease that out?

I don't know. Just my impressions as a reader!

Anyway, I do love your story and can't wait to read the next chapter.

Hey, I'm writing one myself and might want to check it out some time! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

please finish. you are so close!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I agree....please finish. So close to the end now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Please continue... I love. This story..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
where is the next chapter?

I've just finished reading chapters one to ten and I'm addicted, I NEED MORE!!!! please finish the story with a few more chapters. Cheers

cynarezcynarezabout 8 years ago
hey

hey! where are you? O_O

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Come back!

I love your story so much I really hope you finish it! Don't leave us hanging.

loverofmenloverofmenover 7 years ago
please!

please come back !!!! ive been following this for years... hope you are ok

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

You have to finish this story! I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hanging on the edge!!!! Please come back 🙏😢

I stumbled across Your story a few weeks ago. I’m in love!!! I find myself re-reading the chapters just to get satisfaction. If it’s crossed your mind to come back and finish it, I know tons of people would be happy to see how this all ends. You’re an amazing writer please don’t ever stop writing, even if it’s just for yourself.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I just found this story and I hope you come back to it someday. Many times I find authors who, for whatever reason, have unfinished stories that demand an ending. I adore your story, please return.

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