All Comments on 'Becky Gets It Ch. 01'

Please feel free to leave some comments. I would really enjoy getting some feedback (public comments or private feedback) about what you liked or didn't like about the story. This is my first ever attempt, and am looking to have the stories get better as I continue. Thanks!

I have to admit to loving over-the-knee spanking as a theme, so I was excited to read this. But your writing is very well done and the progression of the story and the timing of it was spot-on, as far as I can tell.

Only a couple of things didn't work for me - first, the changing of the narrative perspective at the beginning of the story didn't seem to serve much purpose, and second, I am always disappointed with "it was just a daydream" as an ending... It's like having someone tell you a fantastic story, only to yell "just kidding!" once you're caught up in it.

I'd love to read more from you, and hope you continue making submissions to Literotica. You definitely have the talent to develop a real following around here; in fact, I may add you to my favorite authors list!

Great story, well written - but what a TEASE!

Keep them coming

Absolutely gorgeously written prose...thank you. It is nice to see someone approach the professor-student relationship with such finesse...plus, incredibly sexy. Thank you.

Also...I enjoy your Nabokovian reference with your use of the word "nymphet." ;) I love the idea of the much older male professor using his authority to seduce the younger student.

Excellent story, well written, thank you!