All Comments on 'Becky Gets What She Deserves'

by Loki08

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MidniteSpankerMidniteSpankerabout 12 years ago
Nice

A little unbelievable though... if she was going to whistle-blow on him with no proof why would she not tell when he forcibly took her?? Well written but you need to do stories with a believability to them ... a girl enjoys it when taken, she climaxes even trying not to, etc.

texhudtexhudalmost 12 years ago
Enjoyable

Like your premise, well written, to the point, would like some more.

bipalovabipalovaabout 10 years ago
Great story

I enjoy the inner dialogue of your characters. It makes for enticing stories, thank you! Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved it❤️❤️

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