by Loki08
A little unbelievable though... if she was going to whistle-blow on him with no proof why would she not tell when he forcibly took her?? Well written but you need to do stories with a believability to them ... a girl enjoys it when taken, she climaxes even trying not to, etc.
Like your premise, well written, to the point, would like some more.
I enjoy the inner dialogue of your characters. It makes for enticing stories, thank you! Keep writing!