All Comments on 'Becky's Taken'

this is a very good story, well written and quite engaging.

I do hope you write more, you have a really sexy mind and can translate it in to the written word artfully. Well done.

very well written for a first story keep it up

If this is her first story she has written , then as a new writer she is outstanding. She has the will and the mind to write hot stuff. Keep up the good work.

Sam P.

Kinkykingfisher@yahoo.com

Perfect......Please write more.....

uh uh uh uh! oh im cumming!!!!!