All Comments on 'Becoming Elizabeth Ch. 01'

You must finish this story!!!

A very nice beginning to what could be a hot story. Hope she plans to take control and push his limits a bit. Please continue ....

Please finish this story...omg

sounds good so far lets get another chapter goin

I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I wish my wife would suggest this idea.

being the frirt chapter, I hope it slows and gets more erotic.

Looking forward to reading the next chapters. I love the idea of going to a gay bar with my wife. I would let a hot gay guy pick me up and take me back to his place. My wife would join us but she would only watch. She would get off watching me suck his cock and him fucking me. I wish that would actually come true but alas I haven't yet told my wife about my secret gay life. Maybe one day i will.

Nicely done. I got to see how you followed this up.