by LynnGKS
I loved it. Very clever, the scenes in bed and the intimate conversations between husband & wife. Every successful marriage is all about communication and not keeping secrets. These conversations were a blast and probably not far from the truth. An easy 5. 😊😊😊😊😊
If she were real, Peggy would be at the top of my hit list.
1Star, since I can't give you negative 1000.
This series is pure entertainment. Lots of amusing stuff and a few laugh-out-loud lines too.
...but otherwise a great addition to the story. As sharply observed, as funny and as entertaining as the first part.
Timely x'mas present, a good writer with an equally good sense of humour, will keep me smiling till x'mas.
A total delight to read. Many, many LOLs. Any man experienced in "pillow talk" can identify with the poor husband.
twisted, strange, and very very FUNNY. Being a guy, I can sure identify.
A great second chapter to go with the first. Looking forward to the next chapter and all the bitches. :-)
I was wondering about when she would "get her ass in gear", seemed as if all they did was talk about Pam and Rusty. Good Story, fun and funny!
Was looking forward to chapter 2 and its more than I expected.Awsome keep writing
Greig
Thanks for another great submission!! Keep up the great work!!
Bingo Boy