by Myanlass
This was such a great story!! I love how Ricky still wanted to be her protector even though they were both beginning their own lives. I'm amazed at how Scott proposed to her. The ring in the refrigerator was genius. Great ending to an awesome story.
This was a great story. I loved the charcters. I have been hoping that Jade's story was next, and was so glad that it was. GREAT SERIES!!
thanks for the ending, been waiting a while to read it and it didn't disappoint.
good story. looking forward to next series, but who's Logan? I know Jade, but don't remembe a Logan mentioned. Did I miss something?
This was a great story. Glad that everything worked out ok between Ricky and Scott. As for Katrina she had been plotting and planning to get with Scott since she was very young. Glad that they finally were on the same page. Thanks
this was amazing it deserves to be published and made into a movie itl get a grammy
love love this!!! you should def. continue writing more stories bc these have been great!!!!
I absolutely LOVED it!!! The characters where awesome...and the scenes and attitudes were so real.
Fantastic read!!! Off th read Rough around the Edges now!! I HEART James and Jade!!
This was so good and dramatic. I felt tense when Ricky found out about their relationship. This story never got boring. GOOOD Job. And great writing as well. :) !!!!!
I loved how you developed the characters and allowed them to be human and 3 dimensional. Thanks for such a great story!
New fan here. Stellar work and it got better and better towards the end. You really know how to make the characters come alive in a story
I have to agree, I'm a new fan! Absolutely loved Scott and Katrina's story!
I am a devoted fan of your writing!
I love the story very much! It had a different but perfect ending.
I only gave it a 5. lol best series I've read in a long time!
All I can say is get a new editor, I couldn't see where they helped at all.
With a really good plot, fabulous characters, and an excellent supporting cast. You just need help with the grammatical errors. But the fact that we all stuck around to the end in spite of the errors tells you that 1. this story was compelling and worth it and 2. That you really have talent. I hope you continue to nurture it. I recommend getting a 2nd editor - two heads are better than one and sometimes a 2nd person can catch things the first one misses. :) Keep Writing!! Thank You
I love this story!! I never laugh so hard. You did a great job. Keep writing!!
So happy for how this story ended loved every minute of it, great job
James n Jade would be a good follow up!!!!!!
I love how this ended. I really hate it that Ricky tripped so bad, but for how nervous everybody was to tell him, it was inevitable. I'm just glad that it was resolved quickly, and just as in other stories where I got emotionally invested in the characters, I wished it had ended on an epilogue of the future. You know, seeing Katrina and Scott with their new baby, Ricky and Kendra and their one or two kids visiting. Maybe Nikolas or James flirting with Jade (and/or Dominique). I just feel like their stories weren't fully resolved, ya know? Oh well, thank you for this ending!