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Click here"Wow, looks like the Marines did you some good. You changed so much. You obviously have been working out. You got rid of the curls though."
"Yea, they kind of look down on that."
"I like your hair cut short, makes you look all suave. Apparently I'm not the only one that thinks that as I saw all those girls surrounding you." he chuckled, "I see much hasn't changed."
"Hey, I can't help how good I look." was he flirting with her?
"I know you can't. You certainly did fill out nicely." was she flirting back? He gulped; he needed to get out of here.
"Katrina, you need some help?" Kendra walked in and they both turned towards her, "I'm sorry I didn't mean to intrude."
"No, I was just heading back outside. You finally left Ricky's side, so we can go and talk about people now." Scott smiled letting go of Katrina's hand.
"Hey, be good." Kendra warned.
"Aren't I always?" he shrugged.
"Don't let us answer that." Katrina smiled and he smiled back.
"I'll see you out there." he called back.
"You bet."
Katrina watched his wide toned back as he walked out of the kitchen. She bit her bottom lip following him with her eyes. He did look better than she imagined. His body looked like it was shape to perfection, he wasn't too muscular and he had this dominating aura around him that was driving her crazy. Her body was on fire when he hugged her and knew his hands were meant to be on her, touching her everywhere.
"Well, there he is. Now what." Kendra said.
"Kendra, I knew he looked good, but I didn't know he looked THAT good."
"You are so gone, huh?"
"I am, I just have to find a way to get him to see me like that."
"I think you don't have to try so hard. I saw the way he followed you in the house earlier. He wants you."
"Yea maybe, but I bet he got that whole 'I can't touch my best friend's little sister' thing going on. Kendra, you know how much I have been lusting for him. Now I think it's time I get him."
"And I'll help anyway I can." her best friend smiled.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoFuck me! That was painful to read! Poor grammar, poor punctuation, lack of capitals at the start of a new sentence and does she only have one breast?
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoSorry. I liked the story, but the grammar made me leave. Get an editor. I think they have volunteers who could help you.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoYou have the base of a good idea but the grammar is so horrible I had to skim-read so wouldn't just click onto another story.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI agree with the anon below. You continued to switch the tenses of the story and I didn't want to read after a while. It's a good thing I like the plot.
Anonymousover 11 years agoReally badly written, I hope you've got an editor now, it was almost unreadable.
THELOVELY1GLOalmost 13 years agoHas begun for Katrina towards Scott, can't wait for the rest of the story...
Anonymousover 13 years agoSorry, but some time spent for character buildinng would be very appropriate i think.
Story is ok, but way too simplified.
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Anonymousover 14 years agoare people giving this story less than a hundred?! It's great! Grammar isn't that big a deal.
Anonymousover 15 years agoYou have a good story / storyline here. As others have mentioned, you just have a few grammatical errors that need to be fixed. But you know what? Those are easy fixes!! The main thing is your imagination and talent for telling a story. And you've got that covered. So, take them as constructive criticism only and improve upon it. That way your story will be even more wonderful than it already is.
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