All Comments on 'Before School Starts'

Shes reluctant to go to the party, but she's not reluctant about sleeping with the guy... I expected some more struggle, either with dialogue or her inner monologue.... She just automatically wanted to sleep with him when he said relax.

How is this NonConsent/Reluctance ? She initiates the contact, and no one even whispers "no" ? Besides the category flaw, the story is poorly written, badly constructed, gives us no reason to care about any of the characters - I couldn't rate it above a 1.